The average annual expenditure of college students from three countries

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The average annual expenditure of college students from three countries

The table compares the average annual spending of college students from three countries in terms of total expenses and different living costs.
Looking at the table, the total expenditure of country A was the highest in that of the three countries. In all nations, students spent the most money on accommodation.
In country A, students spent a total of $5000 US per year, compared with the $4500 and 1500$ in country B and C, respectively.
To begin with, the proportion of spending on accommodation reached the highest point of 45 percent of the total, followed by 35% in country B and 30% in country C. By contrast, students in colleges in country C consumed their money for food and books than other countries did, at 36% and 21% of their total expenditure, namely. While students in country B consumed 9% of the total for books which doubled the figure for country A. In term of leisure, the consumption for leisure of students in country A and country B accounted for 22% and 23% in the total whereas that in country C was just 12%. Finally, The budget for students in country A, B, C on other aspects was meager at 8%, 5%, 1% respectively

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, whereas, while, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61274509804 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72388071394 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509803921569 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3733093621 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.555555556 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400309065112 0.215688989381 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17846469323 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109805649394 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265545071636 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120495102637 0.0819641961636 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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