The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of male and female who live in Australia in particular age groups who did physical exercise or sports in 2010.
Overall, the majority of people who did physical activity were women. But in the age between 15 to 24, most of the men were doing exercise as the percentage of 52.8. Over 39% of people were doing physical activity in 2010 for any age who were older than 15.
However, over 25 years old women were doing physical activity more than men. But for the comparation of the age over 65 were almost the same as 46.7 for male and 47.1 for female.
For the age of 35 to 44, the different between male and female who did physical activity were the highest gap as 39.5 and 52.5 for male and female respectively in 2010. And the age 35 to 44 male were the lowest percentage for doing regular activity and for female, the age were 45 to 54 in 2010. All of the people in Australia who did exercise percentage was no more than 53.3.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
... female, the age were 45 to 54 in 2010. All of the people in Australia who did exercise pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39010989011 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29565805123 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1439126684 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.875 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352332166125 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18824088442 0.103423049105 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959993254114 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251101908991 0.15604864568 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948050582321 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.