The bar chart below shows the results of survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on 2 groups of worker :those aged from 18_30 and those aged 45_60 ,and shows factors affecting their work performance

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rently represented. It can be seen that , the work performance factor in team spi...
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Line 2, column 165, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , from
...urity work performance were 40%.moreover,from 18_30competent boss,job satisfaction ,a...
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Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , job
...re 40%.moreover,from 18_30competent boss,job satisfaction ,and money in work perform...
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Line 2, column 207, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rom 18_30competent boss,job satisfaction ,and money in work performance had been 5...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , from
...ly. As far as trend was concerned that,from 18_30age group people work performance ...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , job
... group people performance in team spirit,job security, and job satisfaction had been...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on had been 60%,20%,and 50% respectively Overall,it is evident from18_30 age grou...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...n 60%,20%,and 50% respectively Overall,it is evident from18_30 age group people w...
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Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... group people work performance had more as comapre to 45_60 age group people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9465648855 4.92477711251 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.65175876215 2.65546596893 138% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.892967033 43.030603864 351% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.75 112.824112599 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.75 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 5.23603664747 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319924093076 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172609778613 0.103423049105 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106139853226 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21756807024 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034122938624 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.2329268293 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 61.2550243902 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 10.3012195122 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.82 11.4140731707 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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