The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the generation and the use of electricity in 2014 in 10 nations.
Overall, It is clear that the consumption and the generation were highest in China and United States. While the use of electricity was lower than the production in most of countries, Germany saw a higher figure in the consumption than that in the generation.
China was the country that generated 5,398 billion kWh and used 5,322 billion kWh. US took the second place with 4,099 kWh of electronic energy produced and 3,866 billion kWh of electricity utilized. There are equal numbers in term of the consumption and the generation in Russia, at 1,057 and 1,038 billion kWh, respective. Japan consumed 856.7 billion kWh and produced 936.2 billion kWh following by those of India, at 871 and 698.8 billion kWh, respective.
The last five countries saw lower numbers in consumption and production of the electricity including Canada, France, Brazil, Gemany and Korea. In contrast to the last four nations, Gemany witnessed a different trend between the consumption and the generation of electronic energy, with 536.7 billion kWh in term of production and 582,5 billion kWh in term of utilizing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 164, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
...ricity was lower than the production in most of countries, Germany saw a higher figure in the con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11340206186 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80893311035 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505154639175 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4626276242 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104916404502 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065363145682 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533258167646 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956777686438 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051219324834 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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