The bar chart shows the number of volunteers in New Zealand who helped in sports organizations in 2010. The pie chart illustrates the number of volunteers doing different types of jobs for that same period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people from different types of family who contributed voluntarily to New Zealand's sports organizations in 2010. The pie chart shows the number of volunteers in different specific roles in the same year. In general, the highest percentage of cooperation in activities is related to couples with dependent children which is five times as high as the one for one parent family with 10.9 percent.
The proportion of Couples with no children is 26.9 which is approximately double the one for other households with 12.4.
Looking at the pie chart, the vast majority of volunteers is worked as a coach instructor. Combined with Referee or umpire, medical support made up an equivalent proportion to Committee member or administer in general standing at 62,700 on its own. While the number of Scorer or timekeeper is about double the number of the mentioned previous group which is 128000. The second-highest proportion is related to Committee members with 158,600 volunteers.
Overall, the lowest percentage of volunteers is related to one parent's family. Moreover, of those he helped in a sports organization, the majority is volunteered to teach or instruct.
- Some young people look forward to a year of travelling a gap year before they begin work or university and see it as a chance to broaden their horizons For others this is an expensive waste of time Discuss both views and give your own opinion 41
- Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Discuss the problems and Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities. 78
- The diagram shows the process for labelling shellfish for the international market. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. 22
- the flow chart shows trampling, the negative effect of tourist walking in the countryside for the environment. 11
- how should we ensure that television is a positive influence in the life of children 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...mily. Moreover, of those he helped in a sports organization, the majority is volunteer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, second, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28645833333 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03912832869 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567708333333 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7043640027 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.777777778 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288316915836 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128169068642 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134737308844 0.0843802449381 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157723972511 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127570745257 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.