This bar graph shows the number of days lost due to injury per worker for five countries. There are three time periods shown beginning with the year 1991 and ending in 2005.
The bar chart displays the days lost due to injury at work per worker in 5 countries from 1991 to 2005.
China had the largest amount of days lost in all 3 periods of time. From 1991 to 1995, there was 6.5 days lost per worker due to injury at work. This number increased 1.5 to 8 days from 1996 to 2000 and achieve the maximum was 10 days in the last period. Korea and America had the nearly same sums of days were 3.3 and 3.2 days in 1991-1995 period, 3.8 days from 1996 to 2000 and 5 days in the last 5 years. America, China and Korea had the lost days increased when we look at the graph . In Brazil, the number of days lost was unstable during 3 periods. In the first period, it took every person 6.7 days due to injury, the numbers slightly decreased to 5.5 in the second period and it rapidly increased to 7.5 days in the last period. Lastly, Germany was the only country had the decreased off-day of every worker over 15 years. It slightly decreased from 3.3 to 2.7 and 2.1 for 15 years as we can see through the graph.
Overall, the average lost days of every worker in China was highest, next was Brazil, 2 country had nearly the same number of days was American and Korea .The last country German, had the lowest average compared to others
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, lastly, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21666666667 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00411071842 2.65546596893 75% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458333333333 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3215811684 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339755211108 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163682929541 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791114101283 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263959466609 0.15604864568 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102870980624 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 11.4140731707 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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