The given bar chart provides information about the weekly spending on buying Hamburgers, Fish and Chips, and Pizza by three different income groups in Britain, whereas the graph illustrates the varying trends in consuming fast foods during a period between 1970 to 1990.
AT first glance, it is evident that the High Income and the Average Income Britons are putting money the most in purchasing Hamburgers while the Low Income class is spending relatively less money on these three items and prefer buying Fish and Chips over Hamburgers and Pizza. Moreover, Hamburgers seems to be the most consumed fast food item towards the end of thestudy period, though it was less popular than Fish and Chips back in 1970.
Overall the spending on three fast food items is more in case of High Income group and Hamburgers are getting more attention to be purchased, even more than the total spending on the other two items together. Though Average Income people are putting less money on the purchase of these three food items but they are following a trend somewhat similar to the upper class in choosing the fast food except Fish and Chips; an item given more preference over Pizza by the Average income English. On the other hand, Fish and Chips is more popular when Low Income group shopped for fast food.
In 1970, Hamburgers and Pizza were eaten less than 100 grammes but the consumption increased towards the middle of the study period when a rise was observed in the consumption of both items, more considerable in case of former which surpassed the amount of Fish and Chips consumption after 1980 and crossed 500 grammes around 1990, a value four times higher as compared to the figures given for 1970.
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...are putting money the most in purchasing Hamburgers while the Low Income class is...
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...re putting less money on the purchase of these three food items but they are foll...
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...rend somewhat similar to the upper class in choosing the fast food except Fish an...
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... around 1990, a value four times higher as compared to the figures given for 1970....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 965.302439024 147% => OK
No of words: 292.0 196.424390244 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86301369863 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30396746748 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496575342466 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.1153115563 43.030603864 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.857142857 112.824112599 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.7142857143 22.9334400587 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140562327119 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809257260076 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435080121412 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985637064836 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457782370309 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.2329268293 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.8 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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