The diagram highlights the process of data collection, analyzing and generating dependable weather report by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology before releasing it to the public.
Generally, pictures from satellite, radar screen and synoptic chart made with the help of drifting buoy are processed with the help of a computer, to communicate the forecast through electronic media.
First, the climate condition of Australia, in the form of the picture taken through satellite is analyzed either directly or along with two other sources. On the other hand, data framed on the radar screen and the synoptic chart are actually made through the use of all three sources together. It is clear that radar is actually providing a hub for information; any information transfer between synaptic chart and satellite has to go through it.
At the second step, all the data is mapped on screen, chart, and photo for further analysis and forecasting. At the next level, this data is put in the order with the help of a computer for broadcasting. Finally, the forecast is released through three different means: TV news, radio and recorded telephonic announcement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, if, second, so, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24731182796 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82632112627 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7814668124 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0661851114739 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320760699882 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604153295295 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055610051845 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076249040469 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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