The chart below shows how frequently people in USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The chart displays how often inhabitant of the USA consume fast food divided into six different sectors ( every day, several times a week, once a week, once or twice a month, a few times a year, never) between 2003 and 2013.
Overall, it can be seen how the number of people drastically grown throughout 2003 and 2006, having the highest amount of consumers in the "once a week" and " once or twice a month" category.
people in 2006 and 2013 showed similar features in three of the groups, having in the everyday category about 2.5%, 15% in the few times a year and 4% for never. Both reached the highest point of the chart in two different times. In 2006, "once a week" hit 32.5%, instead of 2013 reached the same percentage of " once or twice a month".
In 2003 the category saw the lover point in the chart, having a peak in the "once a week" group with 31% and run closely with 30% in the " once or twice a month" group. However, this year gad 7% of people consuming everyday junk food, getting the highest percentage in that category.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... food divided into six different sectors every day, several times a week, once a ...
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... twice a month' category. people in 2006 and 2013 showed similar feature...
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Message: The adverb 'never' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... 15% in the few times a year and 4% for never. Both reached the highest point of the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75257731959 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55905383095 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520618556701 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1176064105 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.714285714 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161761371951 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852139530643 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610294452645 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116356032482 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617862919357 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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