The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995 to 2002.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting he main features, and make comparisons where relevantly.

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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995 to 2002.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting he main features, and make comparisons where relevantly.

The chart compares three different items in term of the total figure of minutes of phone calls in the United Kingdom between 1995 and 2002.
Overall, it is clear that the highest number of telephone calls ( in billions) was local - fixed line. There are increases in the figure of minutes for National and international - fixed line and mobiles, while the number for local - fixed line fluctuated during the period.
In 1995, the number for local - fixed line was 72 billion minutes, compared with 38 and 2 for national and international - fixed line and mobiles, respectively. In 1999, the Uk witnessed a rapid rise in the number of minutes of phone calls for local - fixed line, reached 90 before fell quickly to over 70 in 2002.
By contrast, there was a steady growth for national and international - fixed line from 38 in 1995 to 61 in 2002. The figure of minutes of telephone calls for mobiles also rose slightly to over 10 in 1999 and then increased suddenly to reach a peak in 2002, with 45 billion minutes.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70056497175 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52807954787 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508474576271 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.527895906 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174385178162 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106762847006 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492731877368 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134731131578 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422591788772 0.0819641961636 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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