The chart displays the quantity of oil production and consumption in million barrels per day in seven areas of the world in year 2005.
Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant.
The chart beneath exemplifies that the amount of oil generation and utilization in million barrels per day in seven global regions in the years 2005.
Overall, the USA and Canada are the most significant consumer of oil, whereas Africa made the least consumption. The major producer of oil was the Middle East; however, the least contribution towards oil generation was made by Europe.
Firstly, the most striking feature of the graph is that the oil used by the Middle East was 5.7%, while their contribution to oil production was around 30%, which is six times. Similarly, the Former Soviet Union and Africa consumed 4.50% and 3.30% of oil respectively, and they produced nearly around three times of oil accounting for 11.70% and 10.50%. In contrast, the USA and Canada had utilized one-third of the total global oil; however, they had generated one-fifth of the net production.
Furthermore, approximately over a quarter of oil had been exploited by Asia pacific, whereas the contribution towards production was a mere 10.70%. Finally, one-fifth of the oil was consumed by Europe, although the rate at which they generate the oil was the least, resulting in 9.10%.
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| 2019-10-27 | Naman Kumar Singh | 55 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...nt of oil generation and utilization in million barrels per day in seven global regions...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, similarly, so, third, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7697953883 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.4927313295 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.0 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.125 5.23603664747 251% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14413577878 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778765860346 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843376801496 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122432248608 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100499540326 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.