The given pie charts give the information about water consumption for three main reason, industrial, agricultural and domestic use, in six different regions namely; North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia.
Over all, it is clear that countries in Asia, South America and Africa use most water for agriculture while about half of the water in North America and Europe goes to industrial sector.
As can be seen from the charts, more than 70% of water is utilized for farming in Asia, South America and Africa while in North America and Europe this index is less than 40% (39% and 32%) respectively. On the contrary, these regions required more water for industrial purposes (48% and 53%) yet other regions consume only about 10% average. Moreover, the highest percentage of water used for domestic sector is observed in South America accounted for 19% following by in Europe, North America, Africa and Asia (15%, 13%, 9% and 7%)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... 70% of water is utilized for farming in Asia, South America and Africa while in ...
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Suggestion:
...ica, Africa and Asia 15%, 13%, 9% and 7%
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01863354037 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44529673055 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.5485166107 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.6 112.824112599 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156836408079 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983361714798 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423878972301 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124007239678 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311248030685 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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