The charts summarise the weight measurements of people living in Charlestown in 1955 and 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given two bar charts provides an overview of the weight measurement of people in Charlestown in the year 1955 and 2015.The vertical axis represents the percentage of inhabitants and the horizontal axis represents the range of several age groups.
It is crystal clear that ,the weight assessment proportion of ideal residents was very highest in the age from 20 to 29 as compared with other age groups ,by 70 percent.In fact,the ideal inhabitants were approximately constant in their weight measurement in the age period 40 to 49 and 50 to 59 in 2015.However, the weight assessment proportion of obese residents in charlestown was very highest in old age groups ,it was around 60 percent and it can be clearly notified that in 1955 the weight measurement proportion of underweight and ideal inhabitants was roughly stagnate in all the age groups except old age group.
Overall,it indicates that,the ideal inhabitants of charlestown were approximately highest in their weight assessment in the year 1995 and 2015 as compared with several age groups.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18713450292 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06139094151 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497076023392 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 22.4926829268 253% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 193.045763141 43.030603864 449% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 295.666666667 112.824112599 262% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.0 22.9334400587 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131941382852 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106527519798 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387584524835 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106527519798 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387584524835 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.5 13.2329268293 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 61.2550243902 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.3 10.3012195122 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.9970731707 226% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 11.0658536585 226% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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