The diagram below gives the information about the Hawaiian island chain in the centre of the Pacific Ocean.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown
The diagram illustrates the Hawaii island chain, which is located in the heart of the Pacific Ocean.
In general, it is apparently seen that volcanoes are formed by magma eruptions from deep within the Earth's core. It also shows the major islands of the Hawaii archipelago.
As we can see in the picture, the volcano formation in Hawaii began on the solid dense rock layer at a depth of 2,883 km. The "hot spot," which is under the layer, is the place where a colossal amount of magma spume remains static. When the Pacific tectonic plate, which moves at an average speed of 7-9 cm per year, passes over a chink of the Earth's crust and mantle, the magma spume is erupted and reaches the surface. A new volcano is gradually built up after various eruptions.
The diagram also shows that the most aged volcano in the Hawaii chain was formed 80 million years ago. Besides, it is obvious that there are numerous major islands in the archipelago, including Niihai, Kauai, Oahu, Lanai, Kahoolawe, Molokai, and Maui.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...jor islands of the Hawaii archipelago. As we can see in the picture, the volcan...
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... a depth of 2,883 km. The 'hot spot,' which is under the layer, is the place...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, if, so, as for, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82485875706 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37401103053 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632768361582 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1022017445 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8888888889 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190486769156 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889214751317 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122994347044 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162570018259 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143370086947 0.0819641961636 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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