the diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the diagram below.
The drawing demonstrates the equipment and the operation of a simple filter.
Overall, it is clear that there are numerous main stages in the process, beginning with the impure water and finish in the drinking water storage tank as a final product.
To begin with, in the mental and containers, there are 3 filtering layers, namely sand, charcoal, and gravel, with sand at the top and gavel at the bottom. At this point, impure water is put into a metal container with a wooden top. There is a pipeline that carries clean water from the filtered container to the drinking water storage tank which the clean water can be taken out for drinking through a small tap that is attached to the bottom part of the tank.
Turning to how the filter waterworks, at the first stage, the impure water is passed through a sand layer and then flowed down the charcoal layer to refine the water, remove the organisms. After that, the water is passed down the final layer of the filter materials, gravel, for keeping some deposits. Ultimately, the clean water is migrated to the storage tank and through a tap can get clean water to drink
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Turning to how the filter waterworks, at the first stage, the impure water is...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... filter waterworks, at the first stage, the impure water is passed through a san...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65326633166 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33256783508 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51256281407 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8349242789 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247816222754 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118222952481 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623945813775 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148434830992 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533896002093 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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