The diagram below shows part of the carbon cycle. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram below shows the circulation of carbon in nature.
Originally,carbon exist under solid and liquid which specifically are oil and coal or fossil fuels.Following this,fossil fuels will be took away from the ground though mining,or extraction.After that,the fossil fuels will do its responsibility through power supply operating the machine,such as factories need them to produce goods,vehicles need them operating and in the energy industry,fossil fuels are the main role in electricity production.At the same stage,the waste product of carbon exists in the form of carbon dioxide through burning of coal and oil,which seriously harmful to the environment if there's plenty of it in the air,the ozone layer puncturing and that lead to ultraviolet rays hitting the Earth directly,then it causes diseases to all species,including human,according to many studies have shown.Fortunately,carbon dioxide is mostly absorbed by vegetation,they need them to photosynthesize and create nutrients for plants.The process of absorbing carbon dioxide of plants occur day by day without differences until plants become old and die as a natural principle.Vegetation will decay and the product of that process will start a new fossil fuels production.Once completed,a new cycle of carbon is born.
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...ically are oil and coal or fossil fuels.Following this,fossil fuels will be took away fro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75916230366 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.91193033239 2.65546596893 147% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643979057592 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 95.0 22.4926829268 422% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 582.5 43.030603864 1354% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 550.0 112.824112599 487% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 95.5 22.9334400587 416% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.23603664747 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 1.69756097561 1414% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0884412169238 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15751472197 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102879487167 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15751472197 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102879487167 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 53.4 13.2329268293 404% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -41.87 61.2550243902 -68% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 42.7 10.3012195122 415% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.31 11.4140731707 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.31 8.06136585366 165% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 11.4329268293 284% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 40.0 10.9970731707 364% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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