The diagram illustrates the process of building an igloo.
The diagram gives the information about how to manufacture an igloo.
As can be seen from the diagram, there are 10 main stages involved in the process, beginning with sawing the snow from hard-packed ones and culminating with cutting ventilation holes in the wall made from ice cube.
In particular, the first step of building an igloo is dividing the hard block of snow into several blocks by a saw. After that, place the large ones at the bottom as the base. Before shaping and putting all the ice blocks into an igloo, the edges are cut to be smoother. Subsequently, a hole under the wall is constructed to be the entrance into the igloo. The final step in shaping the frame is to put the largest block on the top of the house.
Next, the igloo is covered by snow and all the crevices are packed by it. After checking the smoothness of the inside by hand, there are snow blocks to cover the hole on the enfrance. Finally, several ventilation holes are cut either on the wall or on the roof.
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- The table gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010 2012 and 2014 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Some people think that children should aim to be the best at what they are doing while others believe it is not necessary for them Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it as valuable work experience important for learning and taking responsibility What are your opinions on this 73
- The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010 78
- The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46448087432 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41647475352 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530054644809 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.99714276 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215400428783 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826955767742 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892269631881 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138590142351 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925844873574 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.