The diagram show the stages and equipment used in the process cement making and how cement is used to produce the concrete for building purposes
The given diagram Attic representations highlight the production of cement through distinct stages and equipments, and after production role of cement for manufacturing concrete to be used for building purposes. It is clear and coherent representation.
It can be seen that, Cement is produced by using 4 equipments: Crusher, Mixer, Rotating heater and Grinder whereas, for the preparation of concrete using 4 materials in fixed proportion: cement, water, sand and gravel.
At the first glance, the first step involved in process of manufacturing cement is crushing the limestone and clay together using a crusher. After that, powder is passed into mixer for proper mixing. Later on, miture has been transferred to rotating heater; heat is introduced from end of tube before blend is actually dropped on the grinder. Finally, after grinding process, cement is packed into bags and ready to be used.
Secondly, for production of concrete: cement, water, sand and gravel are added in the proportion of 15%, 10%, 25% and 50% respectively in a container; particularly named as concrete mixer in which whole mixture is rotated clockwise. Lastly can create is being prepared for building purposes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'diagrams'.
Suggestion: diagrams
The given diagram Attic representations highlight the pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, lastly, second, secondly, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39893617021 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95642776719 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632978723404 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3449280989 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.777777778 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354178805202 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128123058897 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116455661057 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228704347462 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853620016975 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.06136585366 127% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.