The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road . Write a 150-word report the proposed changes for a local committee.
Foster Road between SE 84th and 58th Avenue, before and after installaion of wider sidewalks, a new crossing, bicycle and street trees.
Foster Road between SE 84th and 85th Avenue is proposed to change in several points so that not only cars but bicycles and pedestrians find it easy to use the road.
The road currently has 4 car lanes with narrow sidewalks. There are buildings and houses on both sides. Therefore, in a new street plan, they will widen sidewalks placing street trees. Also, bicycle lanes are planned to add. As the results of expanding a space for walkers and bicycle riders, car lanes will be from 4 to 2. Finally, a new crossing will be installed with a spot to stop in the middle of road.
The changes seen above will make it easier and safer for bicycles and pedestrians to use Foster Road. Installation of street trees will improve the view beside it. Instead of them, the number of car lanes will be reduced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 661.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55862068966 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33450058568 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634482758621 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8459466796 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.5 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246651475414 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897947823057 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881396287882 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187218114903 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778798890553 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.2329268293 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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