Essay topics:
Dubai gold sales
The graph illustrates how much money was earned by selling gold in Dubai in the year 2002.
The amount of Dirham earned from selling gold began at 2.5 million in the first 2 years and then nearly remained stable before hitting a low at approximately 1.7 million in 2004. However, the figure increased sharply in the next year and peaked at exactly 4 million, which was followed by a significant decrease to just 3 millon in 2006. Between 2006 and 2008, the amount of Dubai gold sales witnessed a fluctuation, but later increased to roundly 3.5 million at the end of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...exactly 4 million, which was followed by a significant decrease to just 3 millon ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 478.0 965.302439024 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 103.0 196.424390244 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64077669903 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.18573250055 3.73543355544 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53265970112 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 106.607317073 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660194174757 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 135.9 283.868780488 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8062494046 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233850403236 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150453738826 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12681094155 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19559871234 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194716133662 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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