The figure shows the results of a survey of 1000 adolescents in five different countries. The participants were asked at what age they believed certain rights and responsibilities should be granted to young people.
The provided column graph shows the outcome of a survey of 1000 adolescents that was conducted in five different countries about their beliefs regarding the age of responsibility of marriage, voting, and criminal rights. At a glance, the graph illustrates that the majority of adolescents of each country believe that the responsibilities should not be granted until they turn 14.
Observing the details, it can be inferred that adolescents of every country believe that they should have the rights of marriage and voting between the age of 15 to 20, with the exception of UK and Japan. British adolescents agreed that they should allow to marry at the age of 18; whereas, the best age of voting for them is 16; moreover, respondents of Japan state that the best age of marriage should 22, and 20 for voting. On the contrary, both USA and Mexico want their voting rights and family responsibility at the ages of 18 and 16 respectively. Furthermore, Egyptian agreed that the marital rights should be granted just after they pass 16, but citizen responsibility should be allowed 1 year after marital rights when they reach 17.
In accordance with the prosecution of crime, British and Mexicans believe that someone should be charged by the law of committing a crime when they became sixteen years old; whilst Egyptians opine that they should be punished after 14. On the other hand, 18 should be the right age to get punish for their for criminal offenses; whereas, USA respondents opine that they should not be punished by the law of any misdeeds before 12.
From the given illustration, it can be summarized that every country adolescent takes any responsibility regarding family, voting and criminal responsibility between the ages of 14 to 18; however, Japan is the only country where mentioned responsibility is started from 18.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome of a survey of 1000 adolescents that was conducted in five different countrie...
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Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...and voting between the age of 15 to 20, with the exception of UK and Japan. British adolescents agree...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ate that the best age of marriage should 22, and 20 for voting. On the contrary, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 3.15609756098 475% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 965.302439024 159% => OK
No of words: 306.0 196.424390244 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00326797386 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87361212268 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 106.607317073 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486928104575 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 283.868780488 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.5219038467 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.111111111 112.824112599 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340376448464 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162133288892 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434069238885 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212859166653 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080406710044 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.