The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The illustrated pie charts compares the information about the energy usage and emission in Australia. At the first glance Australian household consumed perceptible amount of energy on heating, whilst water heating is major caused of gas emission.
To be more specific, it can be noticed in first pie charts, most of the energy used for heating in housed hold accounted 42% whilst, water heating is second most preferred usage mentioned 30% which is major cause of greenhouse gas emission accounted 32% in addition, cooling system, lighting, refrigerator and other appliances holds 2%, 4%, 7% and 15% shares of usage respectively.
On the other hand, after the water heating, second major cause of greenhouse gas emission is miscellaneous appliance. Refrigerator and heating system contributes almost same amount of share approximately 14% and 15%, respectively. Furthermore, lighting cause is twice than household lightning; moreover, cooling system is also 1% greater than household cooling system.
To sum up, It can be concluded that in houses most energy resources are utilized on heating system where as in greenhouses water heating contributes markedly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
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Line 4, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ses water heating contributes markedly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54494382022 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97791496321 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.3449172983 43.030603864 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.0 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 5.23603664747 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194562437407 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951017074778 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575061351219 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125749964124 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630698941989 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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