The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

The line graph shows the figures for passengers using three different means of transport per day in the UK over a period of 60 years.
Overall, it is clear that the number of people who used cars and trains considerably increase while bus users showed a downward trend throughout the period as a whole.
If we look at the graph, we can see that the figures for car and train travelers had no significant changes at first before starting to grow sharply from 1980 to 2000, then remained unchanged at 7 million and 3 million users over a 10- year period from 2000 to 2010, respectively. After that, it saw a considerable increase to a forecast 9 million car users, followed by train with 5 million in 2030.
By 1980, the number of commuters travelled by bus maintained the same level at 4 million, after which there was a gradual fall to 3.3 million in 2018 and it still expected to decrease, with only nearly 3 million daily users.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, still, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53846153846 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56770646444 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668639053254 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.8818837379 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.4 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8 22.9334400587 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216855048547 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116513230134 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325910300201 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12827236447 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270692326761 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.36 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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