The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of jobless women in 4 nations of the UK in two consecutive years: 2013 and 2014.
Overall, it is obvious that while England, Wales and Northern Ireland witnessed a successful decrease in unemployment, the figure for Scotland showed an upward trend. It is also noticeable that the rates of unemployed English and Scottish women were higher than those in Wales and Northern Ireland.
In the year 2000, the proportion of jobless females in England stood at 6.8%, which was the highest among the 04 countries. This rate was followed by Scotland at 6.1%. Meanwhile, the proportions in Wales and Northern Ireland were comparatively similar, at 5.4% and 5.6% respectively.
A year later, the rate of women’s unemployment in Scotland experienced quite a big increase to 6.7%, making it the highest figure in this year. Such a tendency was not seen in the percentages in the other 03 countries: England at 6.5%, Wales 5.0%, and Northern Ireland 4.6%. Among the 03, Northern Ireland was the state with the lowest unemployment rate, with a drop of well 1%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01098901099 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83793203401 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587912087912 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9965275894 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0908375864923 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412655388448 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277638414338 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0579133246239 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151295739579 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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