The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of the population aged 65 and the above in three different countries such as Japan, Sweden and the USA between the year 1940 and 2040.
In an overview, Japan is the most populated country by the year 2040 compared to the other both countries. It shows a sudden increase. It is seen that the America and the Sweden has a gradual increase around 17-26 percentage.
By the year 1940, the USA and Sweden, has around 9 and 7 percentage of the population of aged 65 and the above, then it increased to almost 15% by the year 1980. Compare to both these countries Japan was 5% on 1940 and then there was a steady decrease in the population near to year 2000.
Every 10 years, there was a mild decrease in the rate of population in Sweden and the USA and it rose soon in one or two years. In case of Japan after the year 2020 there was a huge increase of 25% of population within 3 years.
To conclude, by the year 2040, three of these countries reached near in the proportion and Japan is the highest one among these.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33838383838 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40519134659 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489898989899 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.78973485 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175404936467 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817431426828 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744890790129 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116703993988 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800428612897 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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