Jumbo jet
This diagram represents a range of amenities in fancy jumbo jet, the model A350. Generally, there are seven facilities excluding pilot’s cabin.
If somebody explored this plane from the right to left, the first room which they would visit after the pilot’s cabin would be the VIP galley. After that, they would get into the master bathroom, the bedroom and the office. The next room is devoted to relaxation - there are the bar and lounge. However, at the same time, this zone plays a key role in safety as it is equipped with two emergency exits. Then the executive seating - to be more precise, the plane has 10 seats - is situated. The movement can be continue into the dining room with large round table in the middle, which is also used to conduct conferences. After that, visitor would go through place for two more emergency exits to a huge area which includes VIP and master guest bedrooms with lavatory and two guest bedrooms with a narrow lobby between them. This lobby leads to the cinema room, which is the last facility on the plane.
Overall, this luxury plane seems to have enough space for complement the flight with work and rest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'lounges'?
Suggestion: lounges
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81094527363 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29378244576 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1882508957 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9090909091 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0590862707198 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304705221207 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096356251396 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838193458091 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118538455632 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.