Some people think that paying tax is already a huge contribution to society. Others believe that there are other responsibilities. Discuss both views and present your opinion.
Nowadays one of the most contentious topics is whether paying taxes is a significant contribution to social life or there exist other obligations. Debates over this issue seem to consist of two irreconcilable poles that are presented in this essay along with my own perspective.
On the one hand, it is a popular opinion that taxes as a really heavy burden should relieve people from other responsibilities. First of all, in the overwhelming majority of developed and emerging countries tax rates are extremely high and can exceed 50% of the family’s income (not only in households with one breadwinner but in dual-income families as well). Bearing in mind that it is a huge amount of money, some people consider that this contribution is enough. Second, taxes are mandatory for every citizen and can lead to imprisonment in case of tax evasion. Thus, there would be no option to avoid this obligation, even if a person did not support the government’s policy.
On the other hand, paying taxes can not be an excuse for ignoring other responsibilities. For instance, to live in a clean unpolluted city everybody should follow codes of conduct to throw litter only in trash bins or to participate in common events when all citizens clean up social venues. Moreover, living in a society without committing crimes requires every member not to break the laws. If people were allowed to violate the rules because of paying taxes, modern society would face a range of challenges which could be really hard to overcome.
To sum up, I am inclined to believe that every dweller should pay taxes and relate to this payment as a paramount contribution to social welfare. At the same time, to create a prospering society is crucial not only to pay this money but also to fulfill other common duties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, second, so, thus, well, for instance, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96381578947 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93158367192 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595394736842 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1762389668 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.076923077 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249574450586 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902265416794 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838922896493 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145065181716 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192645538676 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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