Volcanic island formation
The diagram represents how a volcanic island forms. Generally, this growth consists of nine stages.
The appearance of a volcanic island starts from pillow phase of preshield stage when the only volcano mouth exists under water. The next step is called hyaloclastic phase of protoshield stage when the volcano mouth begins to approach to the water surface. After that, the hydro-explosions happen and ash cone appears on the surface of island which begins to be noticeable above the water body due to a strong mist. The fourth stage is a formation of the ground around the former volcano above which a light mist remains. The fifth stage - the postshield one - includes a formation of cones which, however, vanishes in the next step when coral reefs and sediments appear and the island begins to decrease. During the rejuvenated stage lava flows on the surface of reefs and ash cone forms above reefs on different sides of the island meanwhile, the mist, after a short period of ceasing, strengthens. It leads to the coral atoll stage when coral reefs cover almost the whole surface of the volcano island. The last step - the guyot stage - can be described as total immersion back into the water with total covering by reefs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... how a volcanic island forms. Generally, this growth consists of nine stages. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94202898551 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50594853943 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 8.0 0.824742268041 970% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.247594532 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.3 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230622438304 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098326168413 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954959412078 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202373323957 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126970017483 0.0580467560999 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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