The map below shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The map compares the layout of a village in Rye mouth throughout the period 1995 and now. It is obvious that plenty of modern infrastructures were constructed at the cost of demolishing the forest park and the commercial fishing area.
The most important change that the village underwent is the disappearance of the fishing port and the nearby fish market, as well as the shops on the opposite side of the road. Nowadays, some apartments are located along the seaside instead of the fish market. Of particular note is that people living there, just by passing the road behind their apartments, can reach a chain of restaurants which have been built at the old position of the previous shops.
Next to the hotel, a car park has been constructed to serve people now that in modern society car become more and more popular. The housing area shows a little difference with a slight increase in the number of houses. Also, the road towards a small housing development is extended further to the west of the village. The farmland and the forest park in the upper-right corner are converted into a luxurious area with a golf course and tennis courts. Lastly, the café is the only thing that has no change after many years.
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...ng that has no change after many years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73708920188 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58012724114 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600938967136 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4263871031 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0813246607974 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334010138207 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553340489271 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064238757367 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543380874835 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.