The pictures below show the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given flow chart illustrates how to recycle used glass bottles.
It can be seen that the process has three stages, beginning with the collection of wasted glass bottles and ending with the recycled bottles which are used for producing new products.
First, glass bottles which are thrown away are collected and then are taken in a point. next, these bottles are loaded onto trucks which transport them to the factory where glass bottles will be recycled.
The process of recycling glass bottles is ready to start. stage 2 begins with the process of cleaning the bottles by high-pressure water. after that, they are sorted into three different types of color: brown, green and clear. next, the bottles are beaten into small pieces of glass in the factory before being burned in the furnace at from 600 to 800 Celsius degrees. The recycled glass turns into liquid after burning and then combines with new liquid glass to be poured in the shaping mold. Finally, they are taken out of the mold, and now can be used for producing new bottle products which are ready for sale in supermarkets.
- The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits andvegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and2009.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development overweight the disadvantages? 84
- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. 78
- Fire plan for the second floor 80
- Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Next
...ollected and then are taken in a point. next, these bottles are loaded onto trucks w...
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Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Stage
...ycling glass bottles is ready to start. stage 2 begins with the process of cleaning t...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...ing the bottles by high-pressure water. after that, they are sorted into three differ...
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Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Next
...types of color: brown, green and clear. next, the bottles are beaten into small piec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85106382979 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22831078291 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558510638298 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1235774138 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128086837041 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669960383792 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054948645429 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978590161951 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263107287734 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.