the pie chart shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of world.
The pie chats illustrate the information about the ratio of water which utilized for various purposes in six area of the world.
It can be clearly seen from the pie chart is that firstly,39% water was used for agriculture and it was increased for factories work which was 48% and it was only 13% utilized for household in North America. In South America, the highest water was consumed for 71%and it decreased with 10 and 19% in Industry and domestic work respectively. Whereas, 53%water was used by agriculture and it was declined with 32% in factories work 15% water was consumed by household in Europe.
Moving further to next country, only 7% water was utilized for household in Africa, central Asia and South East Asia. The highest ratio of water was consumed by agriculture in these three countries which accounted for under 88%.While, 7% water was used for industry and it was decreased with 5% in central Asia and it got doubled with 12% in South East Asia.
Overall, it is Lucid that the maximum water was used for agriculture and it was minimum for household work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...countries which accounted for under 88%.While, 7% water was used for industry and it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, so, whereas, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79679144385 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55906798714 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459893048128 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8017965816 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.142857143 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247508468845 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152801570365 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091478064594 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201740819337 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913938125158 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.