the pie chart shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of world.
The pie charts reveal information about the ratio of water which used for various motives in six countries.
It can be clearly seen from the circular charts that in North America, 13% water used for households. This figure was increased with 26% for agriculture as compared to house works . 48% water consumed by industries. In South America, people utilized water with 19% for house works. Industries were consumed 10%water in same country. South American people were preferred to agriculture and they used 7% water for it. 32% and 53% water was utilized by industries and agriculture in Europe. There was a slight decline with 15% in households.
Moving further, almost 9% water consumed by house works and industries in Africa. For agriculture,84% water was used. Which water was utilized on households that was 7%. 2% less water was consumed by industries as compared to households but 88% water was utilized on agriculture in Central Asia . In South Asia for households and industries, water was used with 7% and 12% respectively. This figure was increased with 81% .
Overall, the highest water was consumed by agriculture as compared to households and industries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19473684211 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87158841539 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484210526316 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9848771305 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.6875 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.875 22.9334400587 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.4375 5.23603664747 8% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217926693744 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937580356233 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747742448693 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167534363406 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924865183895 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.93 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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