Society seems to pay less attention to women's sports than to men's sports. Why do you think this is the case? Is it a positive or negative trend?
Nowadays, women are also partisipating for sports like men but society pay less attention to them. In my opinion, this trend is unwarranted. There is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most prominent one is that, most men used to play blood thrilling action sports while most women play much calm sports like tennis, badminton and swiming. some fraction of the female players are willing to take part in action games like wrestling, boxing, car racing and even for shooting but thrilling actions and blood pumping extraordinary talents could not reflect from females when camparing to male counterpart players.
Moreover, factual evidence of deterioration of women rights could be witnessed with the guarantee of this approach. this negatively could be so destructive which limits and tears down sporting abilities, skills and talents of female gamers and also tend to escalate social injustice, as it does it also stripes away future success of female game field. some of the opposite sex players tend to discourage and demilish the empowerment of other sex which reflect as a deep rooted issue of this.
Furthermore, most of us have sense that mass media also tend to accelerate mens sport games rather than the opposite gender. Govenment coupled with the media could be introduce a viable and long lasting solution for this scenario. As an example social media can use to escalate opposite gender's mind
for watching girls sports and the highlighted players should treat as celebrities to gain more audiance.
To sum up, in the view of the arguments outlined above, I can conclude that females should get equal audiance like the male counterparts in the sport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, so, while, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 277.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09386281588 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63102850434 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 106.607317073 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602888086643 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 283.868780488 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.916775315 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.583333333 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152483125814 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062788207524 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675538999546 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692463022483 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437592678059 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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