some people believe that young people should be responsible for maintaining national traditions.
People have different views about whether or not young people have a responsibility to maintain national traditions. While those who support the maintenance of social traditions completely have their own arguments, I am more convinced that young generations should be in full control of their own life.
Following social traditions has its merits and demerits for young people's future. To start with, it is true that social traditions educate young people about their country's history and learn to appreciate their unique cultures. Take Tet holiday, which is one of the perennial holidays in VietNam as an example. It is a meaningful time for togetherness when all the members in the family rekindle love and bonding without the generation gap. By contrast, some social traditions are often outdated, obsolete and are no longer suitable in the modern world. A large number of critical rules about women such as arranged and loveless marriages or were powerless and abused as servants which have existed many years should be eradicated.
On the other hand, young people should have the freedom to act like an individual. Nowadays, youngsters are constantly gaining their knowledge either about academic sides or social perspectives. This means that they have full ability to judge which rituals they should follow and under which circumstance should not they do. In addition, social traditions limit creativity and innovations in society. For example, the fashionable industry could not progress if the young rigidly followed the traditional clothes which have vintage styles and previous patterns.
In conclusion, although rituals have optimistic effects on youngsters in some ways, I always believe that young generations ought to be free to shape their own lifestyles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 965.302439024 156% => OK
No of words: 277.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42599277978 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77653708892 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 106.607317073 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613718411552 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 283.868780488 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6736851663 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363650556265 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116019639124 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980550072697 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214284535687 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669802902795 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 40.7170731707 211% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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