Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
➡While many argue that the countryside provides better conditions rather than cities, others agree that we should live in a large metropolis that brings us beneficial health care. I firmly believe that villages could bring about predominantly advantageous to humans health.
On the one hand, there are some undeniable merits of city life. City dwellers are close to amenities, particularly hospitals or private consulting rooms. This means that in emergency situations, it is safer and quicker for patients to make a call for help then the ambulance can take them to the hospital immediately. In addition, by technical assistance and a wealth of proficient doctors, the patient could be treated by advanced methods.
In spite of the above arguments, I am more in favour of settling in the countryside. A place which has fresh air and picturesque landscapes such as green rice fields and crystal clear rivers is an ideal to escape from the hustle and bustle of the city. Without the rush hour and traffic congestion, people can mitigate not only a higher risk of stress and depression but also lung disorders and asthma. I believe that the mature, especially the elderly prefer immersing themselves in peaceful sightseeing to participating in lavish parties.
To conclude, it is important for people to find the best place to take care of themselves either the suburbs or a metropolis. I would always agree that the standard of living in villages is healthier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, while, in addition, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1375 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88638747206 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679166666667 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9527301024 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138039976385 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409609494079 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417869166761 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746551298723 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567585769408 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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