Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people claim that the extinction of special species of animals and plants is the most important environmental issue in our time, while others disagree with this point of view. I believe that loss of animals and plants is one of the environmental problems, and there are also other important issues that should be taken into account.
On the one hand, I can understand why some people believe that the extinction of animals and plants is one of the essential problems that should be prioritized for review, and this problem must be the main focus of environmental protection. Nowadays, many animals and plants are in danger of extinction as a result of human activities. Good examples of these are excessive illegal poaching and deforestation. The continuous performance of such activities has led to falling numbers of some particular species of animals and plants. For example, in my country, the white lion is one of the animals that has become extinct, and there is only one of them, which is protected in the zoo. Moreover, many plants and trees are cut for construction of new roads and buildings. This situation not only can destroy the natural habitats but also can increase pollution, which can threaten the health of humans and animals.
However, considering endangered animals and plants ‘survival as the only main environmental problem is wrong. There are other important problems, such as climate change and overuse of plastic, which should not be underestimated. In recent years, we have seen evidence of climate change, including rising sea levels, increasing the temperature of the earth, and the occurrence of severe hurricanes and earthquakes. Many scientists believe that if climate change is not controlled, the earth will no longer be a place for living in the future. Also, in modern life, many people have consumerist lifestyles, and the majority of them tend to buy new products packed with plastic. Many companies use plastic to pack their products regardless of the fact that plastic is non-recyclable and takes many years to decompose in nature. Many animals lose their lives just because they eat plastic as food wrongly.
In conclusion, in my view, the loss of animals and plants is one of the important environmental problems, and it should be considered alongside other issues because most environmental problems are related to each other. Even solving one of them can decrease the negative effects of other ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...thers disagree with this point of view. I believe that loss of animals and plants...
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Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
... one of the environmental problems, and there are also other important issues that should be taken i...
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Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...e taken into account. On the one hand, I can understand why some people believe ...
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Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...or review, and this problem must be the main focus of environmental protection. Nowadays, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, even so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 7.0 314% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 6.8 309% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 965.302439024 213% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 401.0 196.424390244 204% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13466334165 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 3.73543355544 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8633033769 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 106.607317073 186% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493765586035 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 647.1 283.868780488 228% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1993408617 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.388888889 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2777777778 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 1.13902439024 1141% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27948479906 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903301716426 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106664542118 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207997453606 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910495589495 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 40.7170731707 238% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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