The table below gives information about the employment sectors in which people from 3 age groups worked
The table compares different employment fields among workers from three groups of age
Overall, a vast majority of people choosing to work in the manufacturing sectors whereas accountancy employed the smallest number of workers. While retail was mostly preferred by young people, the oldest age group worked mostly in the field of manufacturing
Remarkably, there was the same percentage of 4% among all age groups in the law sector. Retail employed the highest proportion of youngsters with 23%, 4 times as much as the same figure for the age group of 40-65. However, most of these adults worked in the manufacturing sector with the proportion of 23%. In stark contrast, accountancy attracted the least number of people with merely 2-3% and the figures for agriculture and catering were not above 10%
With regards to the middle-aged group, most of them were employed in what was referred as “other” with the portion of 18%, followed by manufacturing and healthy with 15% both. The percentages of people in the fields of local government and education were relatively lower and most of the employees were adults over 25 years old.
- As major cities in the world are growing today so do their problems What are problems for young people who are living in the cities as the result of continued growth How problems might be solved 67
- Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time 61
- Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion 84
- Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school 61
- The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2030 82
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10160427807 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78302046237 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566844919786 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.6931285393 43.030603864 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.0 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1666666667 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260362826938 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139368584283 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935714376431 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183597761196 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654895404877 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.