The table below shows the percentage of the population who rode bicycles in one town by the age group in 2012 Summarise the important information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The table compares the proportion of bicycle riders in one town with regards to age groups during the year of 2012
In general, the number of female cyclists was marginally greater than that of the opposite gender. As can be seen in the table, the increase of the age was along with a downward trend in the number of bicycle riders and the only exception is in the oldest age group (over 60)
Turning to the figure, the number of people riding a bike in the youngest age group is roughly over half with girls is slightly higher at 52.5 when compares to the figure of boys in the same group (51.2). The biggest difference between two sexes can be recorded in the followed age group ( from 10 to 19 years old) with 43.6% of women and 25.1 of male. Similarly, both genders kept experiencing a decline in the 20 to 39 age group but the data gap has been shortened.
The pattern continued in the middle-age cyclists from 40 to 59-year-old but the gender disparities was less significant with 13.7% females and 9.3% males. Only the most-aged group( above 60) shown a slight different picture when two genders enjoyed an recovery with 19.8% and 14.6% respectively for men and women
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56872037915 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42099855935 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578199052133 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.0826439 43.030603864 349% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.8 112.824112599 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.2 22.9334400587 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13985861263 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804411335721 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525916862502 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112662831411 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755325281185 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.2329268293 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.77 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 11.4329268293 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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