The table below shows the questionnaire about opinions of club members and general public for the new theatre in one town in 2012.
The given tables shed lights on club participants and the local inhabitants’ attitudes towards the newly-constructed cinema in 2012.
As can be seen from the tables, the majority of people were reported to have excellent experience at the new sites and there was a remarkable disparity in the opinions of both target groups considering the quality of the cinema.
When it comes to the cinema’s facility, the percentage of club members and general public who rated it as satisfied or excellent made up to 98% and 88% respectively. The numbers of that in terms of the site’s quality are nearly identical, except for the local people, with 40% of them satisfied, fourth times higher in comparison with those in the club, and 53% viewed the quality of the new theater as excellent. Besides, it is noticeable that only 2% of cinema members reported having poor experience considering the facilities and quality of the newly-built theater, while this was 8% and 7% for the general population respectively.
With regard to information’s satisfaction level, while 66% of those from the general public ticked in the excellent box, only more than a half of members rated their experience as excellent, at 54%. Additionally, up to 16% of club participants and 14% of local residents reported having poor experience at the site.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...tion level, while 66% of those from the general public ticked in the excellent box, only more ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, so, while, except for, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12844036697 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08376997131 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4371420661 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.714285714 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1428571429 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176564535016 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827963663456 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313854225354 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101760470166 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380043621652 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.