Team activities can teach more skills for life than other activities which are played alone.To what extend do you agree or disagree?
The given pie chart depicts the varying expenditure by a particular UK school over a period of 20 years. The data is calibrated in percentage.
The most striking feature is that the school spent its maximum monetary on teachers salaries. In 1981,the school spent most of its income on the salaries of the teachers that is 40 percent while least in insurance that is 2 percent. In addition, the insurance of the school made a remarkable improvement rising from 2 to 8 percent over a given period. The other workers salaries plunged from 28 to 15 percent while in the 1991 it is 22 percent.
Turning to the rest of the description, from 1981 to 1991, the furniture and equipment followed a decreasing trend, falling from 15 to 5 percent whereas in 2001 it upsurged to 23 percent. Besides this, in 1981 to 1991,a considerable rise could be seen, rising from 15 to 20 percent while in 2001 it plunged to 9 percent. In 2001, the school consume maximum amount of money on furniture and equipment in comparison to 1981 and 1991.
To recapitulate, it seems that school focuses much on the teachers paid and spent least on insurance.
Team activities are gaining popularity over the entire world. Presently, it has been extremely debatable wheather group activities can inculcate more skills to the people than playing individually. Here, I would like to accord with the given statement.
There are manifold points to endorse my point of view. To commence with, individual can learn worthwhile tips and strategies while playing in a group. For instance, every individual has different knowledge and skills about a specific task. As a result, the individuals can broaden their horizon of knowledge while working in a group. What is more, group work makes the players disciplined and responsible towards their goals. Apart from this, they learn superior traits such as leadership skills and coordination in a group. Hence, the players become noble character.
Further emphasising on my point of view, players know about their strength and weakness while working in a team. Hence, the performance of the individuals get improved in a group work. Besides this, players feel safer and energetic in a group as it boosts the confidence level of the individuals. By contrast, others have conflicting views.
They think that playing alone would me more beneficial than team activities.Individual activities made the person maverick as they are more dedicated towards their goal accomplishment. Apart from this, group activities lack competition owing to which people get discouraged towards their goals.
To recapitulate, it is well said that, "Unity is strength".Undeniably, group activities have few demerits. However, the benefits of team work outweigh the demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 965.302439024 145% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.592 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29138511876 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 283.868780488 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.213458426 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6666666667 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8888888889 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 3.70975609756 377% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204317819834 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604256958915 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628219165179 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122091356579 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739392565778 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.55 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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