Many people believe that social media has both advantages and disadvantages. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of using social media.
The trend of using social media is on the elevation. Therefore, a plethora of people are depending on these media to connect with people all over the globe. There are many advantages of using these media .However, it has disadvantages too. This essay will discuss the uses and effects of social media.
Taking some points into consideration, social media has made our life easy and comfortable. The media like face book and twitter helps everyone to connect with the world. To illustrate, people can chat and make friends by staying at home through just a one click. Moreover, the business world is also expanding owing to with introduction of social media in this era 21st century. Many business men are holding conferences online by using these media.
On the other hand, it has darker side too. Today, people are facing various health ailments like weakness of eyesight, back pain and so on due to the excessive spending of their time on social media. Furthermore, owing to the whats app and face book children are spending less time with their parents and it weakens the relationships between families. Hence, it results in conflicts between families.
In the nutshell, there is no doubt there are few demerits of using the social media. However, the merits of the use of the social media are weightier than the demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54362820484 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4596159353 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 104.977214359 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455381941519 0.242375264174 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162354670025 0.0925447433944 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124151123542 0.071462118173 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293626543474 0.151781067708 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158304463417 0.0609392437508 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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