Nowadays, majority of people are migrating to metrocites.what are the reasons behind this happening? Discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this growing trend.
The trend of migration is on prevalence all over the world. Presently, a massive number of people are moving to advance cities. Here, i would like to account for the reasons, pros and cons of this growing trend.
There are manifold reasons of migrating to metrocites. First and foremost, people get more job opportunities in advance cities that is why they are migrating from small cities to mega cities.Therefore, people get more pay-scale from these cities.Hence, it uplifts their living standard. Second, they are moving into metrocites for the purpose of higher education. As a result, it helps to develop their career.
There are enormous merits of moving to advance cities. Metro cities have better facilities such as higher education, employment, multi-specialists hospitals,clubs for entertainment etc. Therefore, all these facilities lead to the advancement of lifestyle of people. What is more, it not only makes them sociable characters but also give them the chance to adopt new culture. For example, they interact with new people or colleagues and learn something new about their culture.
Besides these merits, there are immense demerits which are faced by these metrocites. Firstly, the migration of a masses of individuals prompts to crowd traffic in cities. As people are using their vehicles which create traffic jams on roads as in the Delhi city. Hence, it creates hassles to the local people and therefore disturbs their lifestyle. What is more, the crowded cities lead to pollution due to excessive use of vehicles such as air and noise pollution. As a result, it prompts to ecological hazards.
All in all, migration to metropolitan cities benefits to people but people should be aware of its negative effects so that they can manage these happenings in their own ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, so, therefore, for example, such as, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22413793103 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89036490338 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6415703811 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7368421053 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2631578947 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177768280726 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528745235166 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062826085118 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106329459586 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577744494338 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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