Many people believe that social media has both advantages and disadvantages. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of using social media.
The trend of using social media is on the elevation. Therefore, a plethora of people are depending on these media to connect with people all over the globe. There are many advantages of using these media .However, it has disadvantages too. This essay will discuss the uses and effects of social media.
Taking some points into consideration, social media has made our life easy and comfortable. The media like face book and twitter helps everyone to connect with the world. To illustrate, people can chat and make friends by staying at home through just a one click. Moreover, the business world is also expanding owing to with introduction of social media in this era 21st century. Many business men are holding conferences online by using these media.
On the other hand, it has darker side too. Today, people are facing various health ailments like weakness of eyesight, back pain and so on due to the excessive spending of their time on social media. Furthermore, owing to the whats app and face book children are spending less time with their parents and it weakens the relationships between families. Hence, it results in conflicts between families.
In the nutshell, there is no doubt there are few demerits of using the social media. However, the merits of the use of the social media are weightier than the demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94222222222 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54362820484 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4596159353 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1333333333 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455381941519 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162354670025 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124151123542 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293626543474 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158304463417 0.056905535591 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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