Topic:
El Nino is the name of a warm ocean current that affects weather patterns on both sides of the Pacific Ocean. The diagrams compare normal conditions in the Pacific with El Nino conditions.
The diagram, gives the information of the changes in the forecast during the normal and El-nino conditions over Pacific ocean. Overall, it shows imbalance between west and east pacific coasts during both conditions.
Considering the normal weather, over the pacific ocean, the west coast depicts weaker winds which attracts the storm clouds and pouring the rain over the Australia. Furthermore, there is more warm water surface towards west coast and due to this rains giving better vegetation yields.However east coast bears strong trade winds during same time which gives sunny weather over Peru. After that, causing more cold water surface with nutrient rich leading to increased fish stocks.
During El-nino conditions, west pacific experience strong winds and east will face weak trade winds. Due to this storm clouds move towards east coast and pouring rain towards east side that is Peru. Because of this change the levels of warm water and cold water become same on both sides. In-turn causing decrease in nutrients and also, fishes. However, Australia having more sunny weather can lead to draught.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...s rains giving better vegetation yields.However east coast bears strong trade winds dur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35227272727 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23071973524 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573863636364 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6578580312 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234562752988 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10072921436 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113026409938 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199440124551 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112465824817 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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