The two maps below the area of baton bigham in 1937 to 1995
As can be seen , from the map, the area of Barton Big gham changed significtly between 1937 and 1995, first change can be seen in north of baton bingham ,the manor house converted to health farm ,the road that divied baton bingham in two part are extended as you can see the houses are increase near it ,In the south of area number of agriculture land increase and the narshaland are destory and wild fowl are increase ,and the east of lake marshland was converted to wild fowl /sancary by development of city the roud exchange to railwar which was connected by a minor road to the main thoroghfare in 1991,the disused rail way line was reopened ,with abrige being built across the road .in the scubload to the east of the lake ,aleisure complexy was completed and opened in 1993.
- the line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from 56
- people living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should government encourage people to move to smaller regional towns? 78
- Online shopping is increasing dramatically How could dis trend effect our environment and the kinds of jobs required 11
- Some say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing peopletogether. To what extent do to you agree that the internet is making it easier forpeople to communicate with one another. 84
- The two maps below the area of Baton Bingham in 1937 to 1995 85
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 639.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53191489362 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31878428565 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 194.4 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 141.0 22.4926829268 627% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 639.0 112.824112599 566% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 141.0 22.9334400587 615% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.23603664747 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14306816705 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14306816705 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14306816705 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 70.4 13.2329268293 532% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -54.72 61.2550243902 -89% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 55.9 10.3012195122 543% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.18 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.99 8.06136585366 174% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.4329268293 472% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 58.4 10.9970731707 531% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 11.0658536585 506% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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