The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The two maps compares the development of roads and surrounding area of city hospital in year 2007 and in 2010.
Overall, many new facilities has been constructed for public and hospital employees including bus station, separate parking space for public and staff and roundabout for better roads connectivity.
As is described in map, in year 2007 multiple bus stops were there on hospital road and common cars parking area for visitors and staff members. In year 2010, new constructions reformed the city hospital area and has better road connectivity. Previously built bus stops have been transformed into Bus station which has been built on the west of hospital road and roundabouts provides the connectivity of bus stations to ring road, hospital road and city road.
Another important development is construction of separate car parking for public which is directly connected to ring road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ospital employees including bus station, separate parking space for public and st...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'roads'' or 'road's'?
Suggestion: roads'; road's
...lic and staff and roundabout for better roads connectivity. As is described in map...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32867132867 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84738208236 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524475524476 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2743969154 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193208097429 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129165234507 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882843114819 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139959221084 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110542701241 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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