16/10/2017 You cannot pick your friend up at the airport. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter, you should
explain the reasons.
You should provide him/her with alternative ways to go to the hotel.
You should inform him/her of your plan.
Dear john,
I hope you are doing great. I want to inform you about my failure to receive you from airport. I wish i would be there to meet after a long time when you would be arrived at airport. However, because of some situations i am not able to come as we can not control circumstances and we have to adopt those contexts.
Actually, my paternal uncle got ill last night and we had to admit him in the city hospital nearby our village. I also had to arrange finance as we needed 3 lack rupees for his treatment urgently. Unfortunately, i was really helpless and doctors told us that he has a incurable heart disease and has to take medication for a long time. Therefore, due to this emergency i have to take care of him and i can not come to get you. I was really excited to meet you but it was really terrible situation for me and i was perplexed.
Anyways i will send my cousin to receive you as well as he has a new car which he just bought a few dats ago. Besides this, he knows you very well and often i tell him about you. So, it would not only be comfortable for you but also you can enjoy your trip on a brand new car.
I would meet you at hotel a day after tomorrow as until that my brother will come back home and there would be someone to look after my uncle.
I look forward to hearing from you back.
Yours faithfully,
Sarbjeet kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear john, I hope you are doing great. I want to in...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ure to receive you from airport. I wish i would be there to meet after a long tim...
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Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...would be there to meet after a long time when you would be arrived at airport. Ho...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rt. However, because of some situations i am not able to come as we can not contr...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... his treatment urgently. Unfortunately, i was really helpless and doctors told us...
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Line 4, column 267, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...elpless and doctors told us that he has a incurable heart disease and has to take...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...mergency i have to take care of him and i can not come to get you. I was really e...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...as really terrible situation for me and i was perplexed. Anyways i will send ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...for me and i was perplexed. Anyways i will send my cousin to receive you as w...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... this, he knows you very well and often i tell him about you. So, it would not on...
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Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing from you back. Yours faithfully, Sarbjeet kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, besides, but, however, look, really, so, therefore, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 32.9175257732 173% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 266.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13909774436 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32860978699 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567669172932 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5039632813 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235236371276 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896158714456 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662632095456 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129652482616 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532181145679 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.44 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.