Although you have never studied computing, you have always been interested in computers – you buy magazines about them, and you have taught yourself many skills on your computer at home. You have just read a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for those people who have studied computing at college or University.
Write a letter to the Enrolment Officer asking if you can enroll, explaining your circumstances and asking if he/she will make a special exception for you
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in one of your recently advertised courses. The computers and related technologies are my passion, because of this, I am well versed with number skills including but not limited to: Database Administration, Website designing, and Ethical hacking. Your esteemed institute is offering a course with a title "Java FX Technologies" which intrigued me to get enroll for it.
Let me brief you that I already know the basic programming language and would be keen to improve my skills at the advanced level by undertaking this course. The prime requirement for taking admission is that the candidate should have a degree in computing from a recognized institution. Unfortunately, I am a commerce graduate and hence does not fulfill the basic criteria but I am self-made computing expert.
I would like to request you to relax this condition and grant me a special approval for registration. As mentioned earlier, I do not only possess the requisite knowledge but can also demonstrate this by producing small programs with the help of basic Java language.
Thanking you for your consideration
Yours faithfully,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26455026455 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21309991845 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687830687831 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.6708681248 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.555555556 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193998778998 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763295508753 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559010610242 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128852920582 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656271941384 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.