The depicted bar graph illustrates the proportion of literate male and female in seven different regions in 2011.
Overall, a cursory glance at the mentioned chart is sufficient enough to make it vivid that the percentages of literate female in Central Asia and Central/Eastern Europe surpassed the corresponding male rates. While Central Asia for both gender had the highest rate of literacy, people who lived in sub-Saharan Africa had the lowest ability to read and write.
It could be seen that the central Asia zone had the highest proportion of literate male and female by approximately 99% and 100% respectively. The region in second place which female’s ability to read and write surpassed by only 1%, at 97%, was Central/Eastern Europe.
The greatest difference, which was about 20%, between the 64-percent-literate female and male belonged to South and West Asia. The following regions by an over margin of 10% between both genders’ ability to read and write were Sub-Saharan Africa and Arab states simultaneously.
- Schools should stop using books for teaching and instead use films TV and computers Do you agree or disagree with this statement 93
- At present the mass media is very influential and the lives of many people are affected by the news Why do you think this is happening Is this a positive or negative development 89
- Demand for food is increasing worldwide What is the cause of this What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough 95
- The graph below shows the proportion of renewable energy of the total supply in 2000 2004 and 2007 87
- The bar chart shows the literacy rate of people who can read and write byregion and gender in 2011 93
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2987804878 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14172354437 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.9771197566 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.142857143 76.5299724578 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156344927891 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734347785257 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695495447663 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093863334993 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422550017868 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 8.37731958763 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 70.7449484536 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.