A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Give contact details for when you are away.
Give instructions about how to care of your pet
Describe other household duties.
Dear Smith,
Hope you are doing well.First of all,I am very thankful to you because from your busy schedule, you took out a time and agreed to look after my house and pet.I am writing this letter to tell you about some instructions and household duties you have to do in my absence.
As I discussed with you earlier,I will have to leave urgently to attend a conference which is a must.It is a 4 days visit to Ontario.Therefore, I am leaving my house in the morning on 22nd July and I will be back by 26th evening.In an emergency if required;don't hesitate to contact my uncle whose no. I will send.
I want you to pay a little more attention to my 10 months old puppy.The puppy prefers to drink a milk thrice a day with some buiscuits.Moreover,he likes to play in the backyard in evening.Also,if possible;can you please take him out for a round?
Apart from that,can you please water the plants during all 4 days so that they won't get dry.
I will meet you first once I will be back.
Many thanks again,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Smith, Hope you are doing well.First of all,I a...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
Dear Smith, Hope you are doing well.First of all,I am very thankful to you becaus...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
..., Hope you are doing well.First of all,I am very thankful to you because from yo...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...d agreed to look after my house and pet.I am writing this letter to tell you abou...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...sence. As I discussed with you earlier,I will have to leave urgently to attend a...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
... to attend a conference which is a must.It is a 4 days visit to Ontario.Therefore,...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
... a must.It is a 4 days visit to Ontario.Therefore, I am leaving my house in the morning o...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...July and I will be back by 26th evening.In an emergency if required;dont hesitate ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...6th evening.In an emergency if required;dont hesitate to contact my uncle whose no. ...
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Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
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...ore attention to my 10 months old puppy.The puppy prefers to drink a milk thrice a ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...a milk thrice a day with some buiscuits.Moreover,he likes to play in the backyard in eve...
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...hrice a day with some buiscuits.Moreover,he likes to play in the backyard in evenin...
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Suggestion: Also
...ikes to play in the backyard in evening.Also,if possible;can you please take him out...
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Suggestion: , can
...e him out for a round? Apart from that,can you please water the plants during all ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g all 4 days so that they wont get dry. I will meet you first once I will be bac...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...once I will be back. Many thanks again, John
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will be back. Many thanks again, John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43617021277 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95853722436 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670212765957 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.646791885 44.8134815571 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 4.34317383033 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204738994217 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701415046997 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100994776893 0.0603063233224 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989568488439 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110159678991 0.0580467560999 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 8.62886597938 319% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.